OpenClipartVectors, "Treasure Map" 13/10/06 via pixabay
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I believe that I should try to avoid the overuse of pronouns while referring to Lyndon Rive. Reducing that number will greatly cut down on my total number of pronouns and increase the clarity of my piece.
I do not speak directly to my audience: I do not think I need to. I worry going beyond presenting the information to them will invite my take on who is "right" and who is "wrong", rather than what is true or false, a distinction I want to keep clear in this QRG.
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