For this exercise, I reviewed Nick Hernandez's essay, titled Genres of Finance
The peer review activity I chose was to make a copy-editing suggestion. In Nick's essay, I noticed a large amount of redundant, repetitive writing that did not add clarity to the piece, but rather served to add length. By suggesting that he cut out any information that had already been introduced or could be inferred, I believe his essay's purpose became more pointed.
One aspect of Nick's project that I appreciated was his straightforward presentation of his topic's conventions.
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